Submited on: 28 Aug 2011 01:35:26 PM GMT
Published on: 29 Aug 2011 03:35:01 PM GMT
 

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Yes
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? No
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? Yes
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? No
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    - This paper discussed very important issue concerning preeclampsia in Nigerian woman.

    - Some references is so old, I suggest to delete them.

    - Recent references should be added. 

  • Competing interests:
    No
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    Abdulkareem, T.A., Al-Mjamei, S.M., Hamra, A.H. and Al-Haboby, A.H. 2003. Effect of post – mating gonadotropin injection on serum proteins in Iraqi goats. Iraqi J. Agric. (Special Issue), 8 (6): 88-94. Proc. 5th Sci. Conf., Animal Production, 22-24 Feb.,Baghdad,Iraq.

  • How to cite:  Abdulkareem T A.Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria[Review of the article 'Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in Selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria ' by Ahmed M].WebmedCentral 2011;2(12):WMCRW001252
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1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Yes
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? No
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? Yes
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? Yes
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    This manuscript described an important and common life-threatening complications of pregnancy in woman not only in Nigeria but in many other country over the world.

     

    I think that old references should be deleted . The authrs have many other recent references .

    References are too much. I suggest to delete the old ones.

     

    Review of literature is too long I suggest to shortening it.

  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    I have more than 15 years experience in the field of Human and Animal haematology and bood Biochemistry. I have published 5 papers in this regard.

  • How to cite:  Eidan S M.Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria[Review of the article 'Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in Selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria ' by Ahmed M].WebmedCentral 2011;2(11):WMCRW001170
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1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Partly
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Partly
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? No
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? Yes
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    The research presented contributes to the literature by providing data regarding lipid profiles and platelets counts of pre-eclamptic women in rural areas of Nigeria. Data regarding causal factors and pathophysiological mechanisms of pre-eclampsia are summarized.

     

    Some minor concerns and suggestions:

    • The problems discussed extend beyond of the mentioned in the title.
    • The text could benefit of certain shortening.
    • It would be better (for publication) if the text was presented as two articles – a review article and a research article with authors’ own results.
  • Competing interests:
    No
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    None

  • How to cite:  Stoyanov Z .Review of the article 'Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in Selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria"[Review of the article 'Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in Selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria ' by Ahmed M].WebmedCentral 2011;2(10):WMCRW001035
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noted
Responded by Mr. Attahir Abubakar on 11 May 2012 10:24:24 AM
A Review on
Posted by Dr. Aswini Dutt. R on 01 Oct 2011 09:43:28 AM GMT

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Yes
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    Preeclampsia, the life threatening complication of pregnancy is a challenging disorder for an obstetrician. It can lead to maternal and/ neonatal morbidity or mortality. Its incidence in developing countries is a major concern for the prevention and management of these cases.

     Various haematological, biochemical parameters in such patients have been studied in this work. The findings in this study will help in identifying these changes and aid in management.

     

    Authors have done extensive good study. The place and the setting under which this work has been carried out needs to be appreciated. The contents should have been structured both in abstract and the main thesis. This work can be split into separate divisions for better reporting of observed results.

  • Competing interests:
    No
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    Has carried out works related to hypertension and changes in haematological parameters due to work stress, its effect on autonomic nervous system.

    Also studied the effect of diet on cardio metabolic risk factors in males and females of different age groups.

    I have published 4 articles in these fields.

  • How to cite:  Dutt. R A .A Review on [Review of the article 'Lipid Profiles and Platelets Counts of Pre-eclamptic women in Selected Rural Areas of Northern Nigeria ' by Ahmed M].WebmedCentral 2011;2(10):WMCRW00979
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Thank You will Improve on the areas highlighted
Responded by Mr. Attahir Abubakar on 06 Oct 2011 11:47:57 AM