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Posted by Dr. Spyridon Koulas on 30 Nov 2011 07:52:08 AM GMT

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    1. Authors replyes the same phrases to <introduction> and <patients method>.
    2. All patients with Acute Cholecystitis and ASA II-III, were excluded from this study. Never the less, there is 2 patints out of 18 in the group of 3-port L.C. suffering from acute cholecystitis (ac), while there is 5 more patients out of 33 (4-port LC), with A.C; mean that 7 patients out of 33 (13% approximatelly)!!! Authors believes that preoperative selection of the patients was accurated?
    3. In nine patients(1 in 3-port LC and 8 in 4-port LC group), operation was converted to the open laparotomy (23%). Conversion rate is much higher that median. Non the less, is too small the number of patients selective for 3-port and 4-port LC.
    4. In male patients and in 3-port LC group, operative time was similar, longer, or much longer than  in male patients of 4-port group?
    Authors don't mentioned anythink regardind the details of the operation and especially during preparation and division of the Callot triangl elements.
    5. Ombelicus is a normal scar of the human body. Is any specificate reason to create others, new scars?
    In summary, there is some specific thinks that authors must reevaluate in the article.
    Once again,thank you for your's consideration.

    Many regards,
    Koulas Spyridon
    Consultant in General Surgeon

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  • How to cite:  Koulas S .Untitled[Review of the article 'Umbilicus Saving Three-Port Laparoscopic Cholecystectomy ' by Baba H].WebmedCentral 2011;2(11):WMCRW001180
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December 1, 2011 Dear Dr. Koulas Spyridon Thank you very much for your constructive comments on our manuscript and time taken to review it. We diagnosed patients according to the diagnostic criteria and severity assessment of acute cholecystitis (Tokyo Guidelines), preoperatively. Patients with grade II or grade III acute cholecystitis (AC) undergone open standard cholecystectomy with laparotomy, and were excluded from this study. We didn’t mention about ASA. We believe that the high conversion rate in 4-port LC is the reflection of first priority in patients’ safety. Our small sample size might also affect the conversion rates. There was no difference in the operating times between male and female. The umbilicus, in the opinion of the authors, is a significant aesthetic unit of the abdominal area. It should have a natural, vertically long and deep depression without conspicuous scars, especially in young ladies. Sincerely yours, Daisuke Hashimoto, M.D., Ph.D. Department of Surgery, Kumamoto Regional Medical Center
Responded by Dr. Daisuke Hashimoto on 30 Nov 2011 06:33:59 PM

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Yes
3 Is this a new and original contribution? No
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? No
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    this article does not add much to the field of laparoscopic cholecystectomy.

    the article is writen in an acceptalbe way but ....

    first the idea of the work is not of importance. adding a 5-mm port does not cause any problem. on contraray it helps much for safe exposure and dissection.

    the number of cases is few.

    the study is not randomized.

    i think it is a weak article....

     

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    no
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    Yes
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    Yes
  • References:
    single incision laparoscopic cholecystectomy using harmonic scalpel. journal of surgical research (accepted and in press)
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    i work in the field of laparoscopic biliary surgery (cholecystectomy and bile duct exploration) with many publications 

  • How to cite:  Elgeidie A .umblicus saving three port laparoscopic cholecystectomy[Review of the article 'Umbilicus Saving Three-Port Laparoscopic Cholecystectomy ' by Baba H].WebmedCentral 2011;2(11):WMCRW001121
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Dear Dr. Ahmed Elgeidie Thank you very much for your constructive comments on our manuscript and time taken to review it. In this retrospective single centre non-randomized study, we compared the safety and the advantages of 3-port LC with 4-port LC. Although our sample size was small, the 3-port technique did not increase the bleeding and operating time and there were no post-operative complication such as common bile duct injuries, when performed on usual acute and chronic cholecystitis. It indicated that the 3-port technique was safe, comparable with previous reports. The most recent development in laparoscopic cholecystectomy is single-incision laparoscopic surgery (SILS). Although this procedure may have a possibility to be more cosmetic, it requires special instruments and technique. The umbilicus saving 3-port LC is practicable in wherever institutions the standard LC is performed. Sincerely yours, Daisuke Hashimoto, M.D., Ph.D. Department of Surgery, Kumamoto Regional Medical Center
Responded by Dr. Daisuke Hashimoto on 14 Nov 2011 01:38:47 AM

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? No
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? Yes
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
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    The authors decribe a series of patients operated on two different techniques, 3-port or 4-port laparoscopic cholecystectomy. The study is not randomised or controlled. However, no difference in the patient characteristics appears between the two groups.

     

    The main finding of the study is that 3-port LC seems to be as safe as 4-P LC. The study is nicely written and the reviewed literature is well chosen. 

     

    Corrections and suggestions:

    1. Patients and methods: the authors should describe how they chose one of the two techniques for each patient.

    2. Results: the conversion rate with acute cholecystitis patients was very high, with 3-port LC 50% of acute cholecystitis and with 4-port LC 60% of acute cholecystitis patients. The authors should comment this in discussion.

    3. Results: To me it does not sound correct to exclude bleeding complications from the final analysis (as was done with the patients that had a conversion to open cholecystectomy). At least the data should be shown, even separately

    4. Results and Discussion and Conclusion: there was no STATISTICALLY significant difference in the requirement on analgesia between the two groups. Thus I would suggest that this conclusion is removed from discussion, as well as the last sentence in discussion-section modified by leaving "better post-operative recovery" out.

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  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    GI surgeon.

    Some own publications related to gall stone disease.

  • How to cite:  Laukkarinen J .Umbilicus saving three-port laparoscopic cholecystectomy[Review of the article 'Umbilicus Saving Three-Port Laparoscopic Cholecystectomy ' by Baba H].WebmedCentral 2011;2(11):WMCRW001091
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Dear Dr. Johanna Laukkarinen Thank you very much for your constructive comments on our manuscript and time taken to review it. According to your comments, we revised the manuscript as below. Sincerely yours, Masahiko Hirota, M.D., Ph.D. Department of Surgery, Kumamoto Regional Medical Center 5-16-10 Honjo, Kumamoto-city, 860-0811 JAPAN Tel: 81-96-363-3311 Fax: 81-96-362-0222 E-mail: mhirota@krmc.or.jp Comment to review Q; Patients and methods: the authors should describe how they chose one of the two techniques for each patient. Re: According to the comment, we reviewed the patients and methods section. The umbilicus-saving 3-port LC was carried out by 2 of 6 surgeons according to a decision of each operator. Q; Results: the conversion rate with acute cholecystitis patients was very high, with 3-port LC 50% of acute cholecystitis and with 4-port LC 60% of acute cholecystitis patients. The authors should comment this in discussion. Re: We described about the conversion rates in the discussion section. In our study, conversion rate was 21.6% in 4-port LC and 5.6% in 3-port LC. We believe that the high conversion rate in 4-port LC is the reflection of first priority in patients’ safety. Our small sample size might also affect the conversion rates. Q; Results: To me it does not sound correct to exclude bleeding complications from the final analysis (as was done with the patients that had a conversion to open cholecystectomy). At least the data should be shown, even separately. Re: According to the comment, we described the reasons of conversion to open procedure in the results section. The reasons of conversion were intra-operative bleeding in one patient in 4-port LC and inflammation and adhesion in the other 8 patients. Q; Results and Discussion and Conclusion: there was no STATISTICALLY significant difference in the requirement on analgesia between the two groups. Thus I would suggest that this conclusion is removed from discussion, as well as the last sentence in discussion-section modified by leaving "better post-operative recovery" out. Re: According to the comment, we reviewed the discussion section. Although it was not significant and sample size of this study was small, analgesia requirement after 3-port LC was less frequent than those after 4-port LC in this study. This indicates that 3-port LC may bring not only cosmetic benefits but also post-operative recovery. And we shortened the last sentence in conclusion section modified by leaving "better post-operative recovery" out.
Responded by Dr. Daisuke Hashimoto on 12 Nov 2011 02:57:45 AM

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? No
3 Is this a new and original contribution? No
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? No
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? No
  • Other Comments:

    This is a retrospective non-randomized study comparing 3-Port (n=18) and 4-Port (n=37) cholecystectomy. There was a high conversion rate (22% in the 4-Port-Group), however, converted patients were not included in the analyses. The fact, that none of the outcome parameters were signifantly different is probable due to a very low sample size.

    More to the point, I do not understand why it is of advantage to avoid a scar in or around the umbilicus. The recent experience with Single-Port and NOTES-surgery has demonstrated that a incision in the umbilicus is not associated with increased morbidity. Moreover, the scar in the umbilicus is hidden and the cosmesis of such scars is excellent.

    The present study is weak due to its low sample size. The high conversion rate raises questions on the used technique. I do not see why the umbilicus should be saved from incisions and why the proposed technique is of advantage.

  • Competing interests:
    No competing interest to declare
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    Yes
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    Yes
  • References:
    Cosmesis and Body Image after Single-Port Laparoscopic or Conventional Laparoscopic Cholecystectomy: A multicenter double blinded Randomised Controlled Trial (SPOCC-trial). BMC Surgery [1471-2482] Steinemann yr:2011 vol:11 iss:1 pg:24 -24
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    Single-Port and 4-Port lap. Cholecystectomy

  • How to cite:  Steinemann D .Review on 'umbilicus saving 3-Port laparoscopic cholecystectomy'[Review of the article 'Umbilicus Saving Three-Port Laparoscopic Cholecystectomy ' by Baba H].WebmedCentral 2011;2(9):WMCRW00958
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October 3, 2011 Dear Dr. Daniel Steinemann Thank you very much for your constructive comments on our manuscript and time taken to review it. According to your comments, we revised the manuscript as below. Sincerely yours, Masahiko Hirota, M.D., Ph.D. Department of Surgery, Kumamoto Regional Medical Center 5-16-10 Honjo, Kumamoto-city, 860-0811 JAPAN Tel: 81-96-363-3311 Fax: 81-96-362-0222 E-mail: mhirota@krmc.or.jp Comment to review The present study is weak due to its low sample size. Re: According to the comment, we described significance of our manuscript in the discussion section. Although our sample size was small, the 3-port technique did not increase the bleeding and operating time and there were no post-operative complication such as common bile duct injuries, when performed on usual acute and chronic cholecystitis. It indicated that the 3-port technique was safe, comparable with previous reports. The high conversion rate raises questions on the used technique. Re: According to the comment, we described about the conversion rates in the discussion section. In our study, conversion rate was 21.6% in 4-port LC and 5.6% in 3-port LC. We believe that the high conversion rate in 4-port LC is the reflection of first priority in patients’ safety. Our small sample size might also affect the conversion rates. I do not see why the umbilicus should be saved from incisions and why the proposed technique is of advantage. Re: According to the comment, we described significance of saving the umbilicus in the introduction and discussion section. Recent laparoscopic surgery accepts an incision around the umbilicus. However, the umbilicus, in the opinion of the authors, is a significant aesthetic unit of the abdominal area. It should have a natural, vertically long and deep depression without conspicuous scars, especially in young ladies. Primary reconstruction of the umbilicus due to surgery or trauma has been the goal of plastic surgeons from the early times of modern plastic surgery.
Responded by Dr. Daisuke Hashimoto on 03 Oct 2011 05:58:18 PM