Submited on: 05 Nov 2011 04:27:50 PM GMT
Published on: 06 Nov 2011 07:16:34 AM GMT
 

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Partly
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? No
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? Yes
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? No
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    The case reported cited is basically a case of negetive autopsy. No positive findings were detected on autopsy, histology or toxicological analysis. Though it can be rightly cited as a case of sudden death, yet the actual cause of death remains unknown. The authors have mentioned it as a case of cardiac arrest due to immersion in cold water.

     

    In case of death in cold water, death may be due to  -i) sudden inrush of cold water in the larynx or nasopharynx leading to laryngeal spasm.  ii) Vagal inhibition of the heart due to the abdomen striking flat on the surface of water.

     

    In the discussion section these aspects should have been discussed to enrich the quality of the case report. In all cases of death there will be cardiac arrest but what lead to the cardiac arrest is more important. Just because there were no positive findings of drowning and by exclusion of the other causes one cannot be conclusive about the true facts. The present case is a diagnosis by exclusion.

     

    Grammatical errors in the sentance structure at multiple places should also be corrected.

  • Competing interests:
    Nil
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    7 years teaching experience in Forensic Medicine.

  • How to cite:  Chattopadhyay S .Sudden Death After Immersion In Cold Water[Review of the article 'Sudden Death After Immersion In Cold Water ' by Marashi S].WebmedCentral 2012;3(1):WMCRW001326
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Drowning
Posted by Dr. Prateek Rastogi on 31 Dec 2011 08:55:40 AM GMT

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? No
3 Is this a new and original contribution? No
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? No
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? No
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? Yes
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? No
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? No
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? No
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? No
  • Other Comments:

    This article is a reproduction of a well known fact.

    Authors need to revise it throughly, Abstract and case details are  insufficient.

    Was the person alive when taken out from water?

    Within how much time medical aid was available?

    Was there a fight before submersion?

    Is it possible that he died of shock or cerebral concussion(traumatic)) before submersion.

    How much time he was in water?

    These are multiple issues which need to be addressed.

    Discussion needs to be rewritten and supported by suitable references in relation to present case.

    Authors need to do further lterature search on the topic.

     

  • Competing interests:
    no
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    Yes
  • References:
    Profile of near drowning victims in a coastal region of Karnataka. Journal of Indian Academy of Forensic Medicine, 2007; 29(4): 52-54.
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    MD in forensic medicine and toxicology with 6 years working experience.

  • How to cite:  Rastogi P .Drowning[Review of the article 'Sudden Death After Immersion In Cold Water ' by Marashi S].WebmedCentral 2012;2(12):WMCRW001319
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