Submited on: 30 May 2011 09:22:55 AM GMT
Published on: 30 May 2011 02:24:09 PM GMT
 
Review
Posted by Dr. Muralikrishna Gopal on 01 Jun 2011 07:05:38 PM GMT

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Partly
3 Is this a new and original contribution? No
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? Yes
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? Yes
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? Yes
  • Other Comments:

    A good quality improvement study done in a British hospital, which measured outcomes and quality of care measures for patients with asthma before and after implementation of a QI measure. Ensuring adequate follow-up for patients with asthma at discharge and using the hospitalization as a teaching point for inhaler technique and disease management is an important but under-used tool (especially in the hospitals I work at). The limitations of the study includes a small sample size that significantly hampers the drawing of defintive conclusions regarding the ampltitude of the intervention effect. The lack of robust statistical analysis leads one to consider the performance of a similar audit with a larger number of patients over a longer time period. 

  • Competing interests:
    None
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    Treat patients with Asthma, both in clinic and as in-patients on a daily basis.

  • How to cite:  Gopal M .Review [Review of the article 'Improving Acute Asthma Care at the Royal Glamorgan Hospital - An Audit Cycle ' by Eccles S].WebmedCentral 2011;2(6):WMCRW00793
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