Submited on: 03 Aug 2012 10:10:00 AM GMT
Published on: 06 Aug 2012 05:09:25 PM GMT
This article needs improvement
Posted by Prof. Sunil Kumar Joshi on 09 Aug 2012 02:02:40 AM GMT

Dear Authors,

You have brought out a very improtant issue and thank you so much for writing and publishing such an important article. I have gone through your article so many times, for me, its very interesting. But its not very clear. 

 

I could not see what you wanted to measure and what you found. Somewhere it looks like an original paper, sometime as a review paper.

I would like to suggest you to improve the following:

Methodology: make it clear

Result: Systematize it so that the readers can get the message at a glance

Discussion: Improve it. Discuss your findings and compare with other similar studies.

Conclusion: Make a succint conclusion.

All the best.

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    Working as a physician for more than 15 years

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