Open Access Biomedical Publisher Using Post Publication Peer Review
You have brought out a very improtant issue and thank you so much for writing and publishing such an important article. I have gone through your article so many times, for me, its very interesting. But its not very clear.
I could not see what you wanted to measure and what you found. Somewhere it looks like an original paper, sometime as a review paper.
I would like to suggest you to improve the following:
Methodology: make it clear
Result: Systematize it so that the readers can get the message at a glance
Discussion: Improve it. Discuss your findings and compare with other similar studies.
Conclusion: Make a succint conclusion.
All the best.
Working as a physician for more than 15 years
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