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Published on: 08 Jun 2012 02:14:39 PM GMT
 

  • What are the main claims of the paper and how important are they?

    To study the effects of hormonal contraceptives in women in Nepal


  • Are these claims novel? If not, please specify papers that weaken the claims to the originality of this one.

    Not very new


  • Are the claims properly placed in the context of the previous literature?

    Not at all. The contents of the manuscript are diverted from its title and the main focus is on educational status of men and women of Nepal, their occupation and socio economic status. The MS is devoid of adverse effects of the use of hormonal contraceptives. The MS do not provide any alternative to harmful effects of Depo and the modern contraceptives are not mentioned in detail. The data provided is irrelavent as it is unrelated to the title. for example % of literacy in Nepal, different ages of women bearing pregnancy etc.. Overall the MS lacks a scientific writing. There is no Materials and Methods, Results and Discussion section. All have been jumbled in the Introduction and the paper ends with the introduction.


  • Do the results support the claims? If not, what other evidence is required?

    No


  • If a protocol is provided, for example for a randomized controlled trial, are there any important deviations from it? If so, have the authors explained adequately why the deviations occurred?

    No trial only survey


  • Is the methodology valid? Does the paper offer enough details of its methodology that its experiments or its analyses could be reproduced?

    no


  • Would any other experiments or additional information improve the paper? How much better would the paper be if this extra work was done, and how difficult would such work be to do, or to provide?

    in fact nothing is organised


  • Is this paper outstanding in its discipline? (For example, would you like to see this work presented in a seminar at your hospital or university? Do you feel these results need to be incorporated in your next general lecture on the subject?) If yes, what makes it outstanding? If not, why not?

    extremely poor


  • Other Comments:

    My request to the Editors to Kindly assure atleast that the paper has the scientifically arranged sections.

  • Competing interests:
    No
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:
    no specific
  • How to cite:  Purohit G N.Hormonal Contraception in Nepal: A Necessary Enquiry [Review of the article 'Hormonal Contraception in Nepal: A Necessary Enquiry ' by Banerjee I].WebmedCentral 2012;3(6):WMCRW001913
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Hormonal contraception in nepal our observations
Posted by Dr. Pankaj P Salvi on 12 Jun 2012 03:40:10 PM GMT

  • What are the main claims of the paper and how important are they?

    the main claim of the paper is about the societies status, its trends about the socioeconomic progress and how the women in the society use contraception ant he ill effects of the same..etcThe claim is a major step to go in the right direction for  a mass application and deciding the right use of a particular contraception and review thepresent practice of the contraceptions.


  • Are these claims novel? If not, please specify papers that weaken the claims to the originality of this one.

    surely the claims are very much novel


  • Are the claims properly placed in the context of the previous literature?

    no.the method of placement should be of highest quality and chronological and methodological


  • Do the results support the claims? If not, what other evidence is required?

    well its an observation stated in plane language and is not a study for the results to support the claim.anyway the observations do support the claim very well.


  • If a protocol is provided, for example for a randomized controlled trial, are there any important deviations from it? If so, have the authors explained adequately why the deviations occurred?

    no protocol or methodology is used/provided.these are pure observatons.


  • Is the methodology valid? Does the paper offer enough details of its methodology that its experiments or its analyses could be reproduced?

    no methodolgy used.


  • Would any other experiments or additional information improve the paper? How much better would the paper be if this extra work was done, and how difficult would such work be to do, or to provide?

    well the comparative study with existing ideological methods ,as an observational study and all in a tabular form and where possible the tests of statistics would improve the gravity of the claims.


  • Is this paper outstanding in its discipline? (For example, would you like to see this work presented in a seminar at your hospital or university? Do you feel these results need to be incorporated in your next general lecture on the subject?) If yes, what makes it outstanding? If not, why not?

    no its not outstanding due to the reasonns mentioned in above review.methodology is needed.


  • Other Comments:

    its more of a observed statement / an article not a RCT/study...

  • Competing interests:
    no
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:
    dealing with the yearly statistical values in a almost same population group.
  • How to cite:  Salvi P P.Hormonal contraception in nepal our observations[Review of the article 'Hormonal Contraception in Nepal: A Necessary Enquiry ' by Banerjee I].WebmedCentral 2012;3(6):WMCRW001911
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Article Review
Posted by Dr. Mohammad Othman on 08 Jun 2012 10:38:17 PM GMT

  • What are the main claims of the paper and how important are they?

    Author claiming that hormonal contraception in women was not tested in studies at all. I think this is extremly important and should be encureged.


  • Are these claims novel? If not, please specify papers that weaken the claims to the originality of this one.

    Yes this is a novel claim.


  • Are the claims properly placed in the context of the previous literature?

    The claims properly placed in the context of the article.


  • Do the results support the claims? If not, what other evidence is required?

    The results support author claims


  • If a protocol is provided, for example for a randomized controlled trial, are there any important deviations from it? If so, have the authors explained adequately why the deviations occurred?

    No protocol provided


  • Is the methodology valid? Does the paper offer enough details of its methodology that its experiments or its analyses could be reproduced?

    this is just an article not a study.


  • Would any other experiments or additional information improve the paper? How much better would the paper be if this extra work was done, and how difficult would such work be to do, or to provide?

    No need for additional information


  • Is this paper outstanding in its discipline? (For example, would you like to see this work presented in a seminar at your hospital or university? Do you feel these results need to be incorporated in your next general lecture on the subject?) If yes, what makes it outstanding? If not, why not?

    the article is outstanding in the amount of information about nepal population and attetude toward contraception.


  • Other Comments:

    NA

  • Competing interests:
    None
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    I am a consultant and author in Obstetrics and Gynaecology

  • How to cite:  Othman M .Article Review[Review of the article 'Hormonal Contraception in Nepal: A Necessary Enquiry ' by Banerjee I].WebmedCentral 2012;3(6):WMCRW001891
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